[stylist] Punctuation question

[James H. "Jim" Canaday M.A. N6YR]

think it looks good to me.

if I were writing it, given my preference for simple direct sentences 
unlike this one,  I would put your statement into two sentences.
jc

At 11:35 PM 5/24/2010, you wrote:
>Hey guys, is this sentence punctuated correctly?
>
>"We will see that belonging to an organization, being a contributing member
>of something which is effecting all of humanity for the better, has had a
>tremendous impact on my life."
>
>
>
>I'm wondering if the commas should be replaced with something else?
>
>thanks
>
>Angela
>
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