[stylist] Punctuation question

[Donna Hill]

Hi Angela,
I would use dashes, and according to Lori's comments on Paul's work, 
that should be correct since the phrase is in the middle of the sentence.
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Angela Fowler wrote:
> Hey guys, is this sentence punctuated correctly?
>  
> "We will see that belonging to an organization, being a contributing member
> of something which is effecting all of humanity for the better, has had a
> tremendous impact on my life."
>
>  
>
> I'm wondering if the commas should be replaced with something else?
>
> thanks
>
> Angela
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