[stylist] Punctuation question

[loristay]

The commas look okay to me, but the word you want is spelled a f f e c 
t i n g.
Lori
On May 25, 2010, at 12:35:01 AM, "Angela Fowler" <fowlers at syix.com> 
wrote:

 From:  "Angela Fowler" <fowlers at syix.com>
Subject:    [stylist] Punctuation question
Date:   May 25, 2010 12:35:01 AM EDT
To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Hey guys, is this sentence punctuated correctly?

"We will see that belonging to an organization, being a contributing 
member
of something which is effecting all of humanity for the better, has 
had a
tremendous impact on my life."



I'm wondering if the commas should be replaced with something else?

thanks

Angela

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