[stylist] query

Chris Kuell ckuell at comcast.net
Mon Nov 15 22:41:33 UTC 2010


Judith,

I think this reads well, although I'd change 'conflict with inferiority' to 
'inferoarity complex', which is shorter and clearer, IMO. It's hard to 
imagine that this fits on 1 page (my word count was 524) if you use a font 
and spacing that is reasonable for your publisher to read. If you were to 
trim, I'd cut your bio some, including why you wrote the book (although I 
like your reasoning). The way I figure it, a publisher doesn't care--they 
are in it to make money.

chris
 





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