[stylist] Short story: warrior

[Shelley J. Alongi]

Interesting story it will be nice with a little work as are all stories. 
It's part of being a writer, always making our stories better. You have 
gotten some great advice here I hope you'll work on it. Perhaps you can 
submit it to the NFB youth contest this year.



Shelley J. Alongi
NFBWD Slate and Style editor
Home Office: (714) 525-9632
Read my Metrolink writings and other essays and stories
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Updated: September 18, 2010
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Danielle Montour" <dannivoiceangel333 at gmail.com>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Sunday, October 10, 2010 5:52 PM
Subject: [stylist] Short story: warrior


> Hi,
> I wrote this story two years ago when I was 11, and I want to
> improve it.  I still want to keep it a short story, I just want
> to make it better.  Could anyone help me with this? Also, if I'm
> not supposed to send attachments to this list, I'm sorry.  I
> never heard I couldn't, so I'm assuming that it's ok.
>
> Danielle
>


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