[stylist] story review

[Anita Adkins]

Hello,

I have written a short story, and I am wondering if anyone would be willing to read and provide comments. It is a story for kids about a boy who feels guilty for causing his brother's blindness. Thus, he tries to protect him to make up for it, especially when a man shows up wanting to take the blind brother away to a kid's camp. If so, please respond offlist at aadkins7 at verizon.net
Thanks, and happy writing, everyone. Anita