[stylist] New Story

Mon May 2 12:34:47 UTC 2011

Thanks for the way to know how to spell dessert VS desert; I've either never heard that one or have forgotten.

The boy had a tendency to lose his temper and cry on the alleys when his game wasn't going well; that was why he almost didn't get to bowl with the adults.

I think dad was just mad at the end; he was serious about the game and the kids were more drunk and cavalier about the game than really mean.  I think they were to the point that they really didn't understand what they were doing.  They thought it was a joke.  Dad wants the boy to not do things like that when he grows up so he doesn't ruin someone else's bowling experience.

The punch line then is that bowling is a serious sport and those who don't take it seriously can ruin the experiences of those who do.  The secondary punch line is that when us blind people are rewarded and don't deserve it, then we figure it out and it gets embarrassing.

And this leads to the question of whether or not the boy should have gotten the green stamps anyway.  The answer is that depends.  If he gets them because he would have gotten the strike had he not been bothered by the other bowlers (note that you never know) then he should have gotten the stamps.  If he gets them because he is blind and needs to be pitied, then the answer is no and he wouldn't appreciate the gesture in the long term anyway.  The boy suspects (note that he doesn't know for sure) that mom's rationale is the second; that is why he is embarrassed by mom's behavior.

Anyway, thanks for all the good words of encouragement and the good advice.

Shawn

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Judith Bron
Sent: Saturday, April 30, 2011 10:13 PM
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Subject: Re: [stylist] New Story

A teacher from long ago, I can't remember which one, said the easy way to
remember the number of S's in the word desert and dessert is this:
Which would you rather have more of?  Dessert or desert?  Obviously you want
more desserts.  That's how you remember that desert has one S while dessert
has two.  Judith
----- Original Message -----
From: "Barbara Hammel" <poetlori8 at msn.com>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Friday, April 29, 2011 11:21 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] New Story

> One misspelled word that jumped out at me was the desert you ate instead
> of the dessert.  (Which one it was depends on how much sand you ate. LOL!)
>
> What was your dad talking about in your behavior?  When someone says stuff
> to you when you know you're doing the right thing, it startles you.
> That's why they do it.  (They should have given you the points.  It wasn't
> like you intended to do it.  The kid was mean and made you mess up.)
> That's water under the bridge, though.
> Barbara
>
>
>
>
> Through the sunny fields of yesterday
> Echo voices of children now grown,
> Their golden peals of laughter
> Ring upon the ivied stone.
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jacobson, Shawn D
> Sent: Friday, April 29, 2011 8:07 AM
> To: 'Writer's Division Mailing List'
> Subject: [stylist] New Story
>
> Here is my latest.  It's a change of pace for me, not science fiction,
> it's more of a childhood memory tale.
>
> I hope you enjoy
>
> Shawn Jacobson
> Mathematical Statistician
> Phone# (202)-475-8759
> Fax# (202)-485-0275
>
> A Night at the Totem Bowl
>
> If you want to start a fight in my family, just say the bowling is not a
> sport.  I know that some people see it as an excuse to drink beer, but in
> my family, bowling was serious business.  Dad was a truly good bowler, not
> quite good enough to go pro, but good enough to bowl in tournaments all
> over the place and sometimes win money.  And mom was the best women bowler
> at the Totem bowl.
> So when we went there to bowl for green stamps, I know we would have fun
> in a serious way.  "Remember to wait till the bowler on the right is
> finished before you start your approach" dad reminded me "and when you're
> finished go back and sit down.  Don't wait at the end of the approach
> until the pins fall."  This was going to be my first chance to bowl for
> green stamps with the adults, and dad wanted to make sure I acted the
> part.
> We went into the bowling alley past the Indian inspired tile art, and
> walked up to the counter on the right to pay.  I didn't need to see to
> know that I was in a bowling alley.  The smell of wax, oil, and rubber
> along with the crazy music of falling pins would tell me where I was even
> if I were totally blind.  "Let's get supper" mom said.  "Then it will be
> time to get our bags."
> We had supper in the lounge.  Kids weren't supposed to go in there because
> they sold beer.  But they let us in whether due to my mom having worked
> there before or because they didn't think a blind guy could cause trouble,
> I don't know.  Sighted people's motivations baffle me sometimes.
> The lounge wasn't that interesting, even if it was adults only; it was
> just a dimly lighted room full of tables and chairs with a bar along the
> side across the kitchen from the lunch counter; the place kids could eat.
> It was about as interesting as the Papoose room where the nursery was.
> The area around the coat racks with its wooden carvings of Indian spirits
> was more interesting.  So were the halls that led back past carved totem
> poles to the room where you could see the automatic pinsetters from the
> rear, now that was cool.  The lounge was, well, boring.  At least the food
> was good.
> I had my usual, a cottage cheese salad with a cherry on top, and a
> tenderloin sandwich made with a big piece of fried pork that dwarfed the
> bun that pretended to hold it.  Then there was desert, a big chunk of
> coconut cream pie full of sweet creamy goodness.
> Then it was time to bowl.  I got to throw the first ball and, I guess I
> was over excited, but I threw the ball wide; gutter ball, darned if I
> didn't hate that.  This get guffaws of laughter from the college aged kids
> that were sharing the alleys with us.  I assumed they were college aged
> kids because they had Hawkeye sweaters on.
> "Stay calm, don't lose your cool" dad said "go up there and pick up that
> spare."  Dad knew that I tended to get mad when the game wasn't going my
> way.  I almost didn't get to bowl tonight because I'd lost my temper
> during a practice game a few days ago.  I screwed my temper down, picked
> up the ball and tried again.  No spare, but at least I kept this one on
> the alley.
> My first big chance at green stamps came in the fourth frame.  I looked up
> at the rack; the color wasn't quite normal.  Was that a yellow headpin?  I
> squared my shoulders to the pins and pushed off.  The shot felt right, the
> good feel of a well executed swing, the ball rolled down the alley and,
> boom! The pins flew about in a blur.  Strike!
> "That's the way tiger" mom yelled.  "Now get your stamps."
> I bounded up the three steps from the bowling area to find the table where
> the stamps were.  "Over there" dad said then, seeing my confusion "Right,
> no, now forward."   I got to the table and picked up my sheet of stamps.
> Dad later said there were 80 stamps, but I didn't count them.  I just got
> a death grip on my prize and headed back.  Unlike the sportsmanship award
> I had been given, I think for being blind, I had actually earned this by
> doing something well, an honest sheet of stamps for an honest strike.
> We went back to bowling.  We all did pretty well, I even had some more
> strikes, but we didn't get a lot of chances for a big stamp total.  Mom
> got 100 stamps for a strike with a green headpin and dad had one strike
> worth 50 stamps, but nothing else big.
> The kids who were bowling with us had a couple of shots at 500 stamps, but
> by then their games had pretty much fallen apart.  I guess it had
> something to do with the amount of beer they were drinking.  I didn't know
> how you could be so thirsty that you needed five or six drinks each like
> they had, I only wanted two pops the whole night, but they must have been
> real thirsty because they kept drinking.
> Dad had bought some raffle tickets, and his number was drawn for a chance
> to win 2,500 stamps.  He went up, through a good ball, but when it was
> over he still had the eight pin standing.  Dad plodded back shaking his
> head and muttering about the only true tap in bowling.  After all the
> raffle shots, we went back to bowling.
> Throughout the night, everything else, the Indian art, the desolation of
> another year at the Braille school, even the antics of the people bowling
> with us seemed to fade into the background.  Only the game was important.
> For that night, the game was at the center of the universe, the only thing
> that mattered.
> Then it was the tenth frame of the last game, my last chance for something
> exciting to happen.  I looked up and saw, to my dismay, a rack of white
> pins; not a colored pin in sight.  "Get a strike and you get another
> chance" dad reminded me; but I already knew that; I knew the rules.
> I threw the ball.  I looked like it could be a strike, but it was too far
> to the right, too light on the headpin.  The ball chopped the headpin in
> front of the two; it ricocheted off the side and kicked the four pin out
> from between the two and the seven, the left-side baby split.
> "You know how to pick that up" encouraged mom "just hit the two on the
> left side and let the ball hook into the seven."
> So I throw the ball, but, again, it was too far right.  I stood at the end
> of the approach trying every bit of body English I could to get the ball
> to go just a bit further left.  It rolled, rolled, and just clipped the
> two. It bounced of the side and just hit the seven pin with barely enough
> force to make it fall.  "Great spare" yelled mom.  "That's the way!"
> I went back to the return for my ball, picked it up and looked at the next
> set of pins.
> At first, it looked like the pin setter had broken and only set up part of
> the rack of pins.  Then I realized what I was seeing, colored pins.  Just
> then mom got real excited; "Wow! You can get 5,000 stamps if you get a
> strike.  Go get em tiger!"
> I backed up to the very back of the approach and prepared for the shot.
> This was the one I'd been fantasizing about all night, indeed for the last
> week since mom and dad had told me I could bowl with them.  I fiddled with
> the ball to get in the exact, most comfortable, position, squared my
> shoulders to the pins the way dad had told me, checked my feet, tried to
> relax, and, innocent of the fear of failure, I launched myself down the
> approach.  Step one: I pushed the ball out so that my right arm could take
> the ball back.  Step two: I let gravity and my arm start the ball on the
> back swing.  Step three: I let the momentum of the ball carry it back and
> up as my knees started to bend so I wouldn't drop the ball.  Step 4:....
> "Hay blind boy, let me show you how to get to the pins" one of the college
> kids, sounding like the alley drunks I had met, yelled as he headed for
> the approach.  I don't know if it was the kid or my dad bellowing at him
> to shut up stat started me, but my final step faltered and the slide
> became a stumble.  The ball thudded onto the lane.  I had too much follow
> through, so I teetered on the brink of the foul line.  How the shot was as
> good as it was I have no idea.  It kind of wobbled down the alley going
> bump, bump, bump as it rolled over the thumb hole, then that stopped and
> the ball started to hook to the left of the headpin.  Meanwhile I flailed
> like you would if you slipped on unexpected ice.  I wind milled myself
> around, but I knew I would fall.  The ball hit the pins and they all went
> down, but it was no use, I finally stumbled over the line; it wouldn't
> count.
> I picked myself up finding myself in a sudden madhouse.  Dad was yelling
> at the college kids with words that made my mouth taste of lava just
> listening to them.  Dad didn't show his temper much, but it was on display
> now.  I think he wanted to murderize someone and might have hurt someone
> except that the manager had run down to the lanes to try to calm him down.
> The manager was trying to cool dad off while telling the kids that they
> were done for the night and not to come back until they grew up in maybe
> ten years or so. I wanted to cry, and even more I wanted to go slug
> someone, but the college kids were bigger than I am and I've never been
> much of a fighter.
> Mom was at the stamp table imploring them to give me the stamps anyway
> since all the pins had fallen.  I knew my blindness was part of the
> conversation, it always is.  I couldn't hear what she was saying, but I
> could imagine and the imagining was enough to be embarrassing.  "Come on"
> said dad in a tired disgusted voice "let's get out of here."  He pulled
> mom away from the scorer's table, I think mom wanted to say more but knew
> better than to argue with dad when he was in one of those moods.  We
> headed out.
> "Promise me you'll never act like that on a bowling alley ever" dad
> admonished.
> "I won't" I replied as we walked out into the parking lot.
> "I mean it son.  Always take the game seriously" dad continued "promise!"
> "Sure" I replied.  "I promise."
> I saw the bowling alley disappear behind us.  Summer vacation was almost
> done and school loomed darkly in the future.  At least, I would have
> something to tell the other kids at Vinton when I got there.
>
>
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