[stylist] Haiku mania

[Brad Dunse']

Thanks. Beats me. Jackie? Answer? My first one. I'm a 
songwriter.  :)  But they are great exercises in writing concise it would seem.

Brad

On 10/17/2011  08:34 PM Ashley Bramlett said...
>Nice haiku! Its certainly about nature and describes the end of fall 
>with good imagery.
>Can they be about other things like objects? Or maybe its restricted 
>to nature and things outside. Can they be
>in first person saying "I". Maybe the first line could be I whistled 
>with the wind.
>
>Ashley
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>>I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info 
>>Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element 
>>of emotion, seasonal, etc.
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>No more cricket's song
>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>  Flakes close the eyes of fall
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>Brad
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