[stylist] Haiku mania

[Homme, James]

Hi Brad,
Very good, but the last line has six syllables.

Jim

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>I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info
>Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element
>of emotion, seasonal, etc.

No more cricket's song
Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
  Flakes close the eyes of fall

Brad




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