[stylist] Haiku mania

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

What I do, no expert opinion here, is to treat the entire haiku as a thought (sentence)  more experienced folk can chime in.

Shawn

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From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Homme, James
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Hi Brad,
I don't know. We have lots of experts here. :)

Jim
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Jim,

I wish it was spring :). Since I botched my attempt which I'll not 
torture you and others with the fix, take this for what it's worth. I 
wonder if each line  of the haiku is meant to be a complete thought 
or statement independetn from the one prior?


On 10/18/2011  08:45 AM Homme, James said...
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