[stylist] Haiku mania

[Ashley Bramlett]

Right, he has eight in the second line and not sure how many in the third, 
but its not five.
Otherwise a good start to a poem.

-----Original Message----- 
From: Barbara Hammel
Sent: Tuesday, October 18, 2011 1:58 PM
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But, Brad, it's supposed to be five syllables in the last line.  Seventeen
syllables in a five, seven, five sequence.
Barbara




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-----Original Message----- 
From: Homme, James
Sent: Tuesday, October 18, 2011 6:34 AM
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Hi Brad,
Beautiful. The only reason I caught it was that my coffee is beginning to
work.

Jim

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of Brad Dunse'
Sent: Tuesday, October 18, 2011 7:32 AM
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Jim,

Good catch. So much for using  fingers on both hands to count lol. Here we
are:

>No more cricket's song
>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>Flakes close automn's baggy eyes

Brad


On 10/18/2011  06:05 AM Homme, James said...
>Hi Brad,
>Very good, but the last line has six syllables.
>
>Jim
>
>-----Original Message-----
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>On Behalf Of Brad Dunse'
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>
> >I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info
> >Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element
> >of emotion, seasonal, etc.
>
>No more cricket's song
>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>   Flakes close the eyes of fall
>
>Brad
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