[stylist] Haiku mania

[Brad Dunse']

Barbara,

Yep. I exposed my inability to count prior to my fifth cup of coffee. 
But? I've got a fresh cup at my side and so...

>>No more cricket's song
>>Leaves and hearts scrape windblown curbs
>>Flakes close automn's eyes

Now for my Haiku Hiatus :).

Brad


Brad


On 10/18/2011  12:58 PM Barbara Hammel said...
>But, Brad, it's supposed to be five syllables in the last 
>line.  Seventeen syllables in a five, seven, five sequence.
>Barbara
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>-----Original Message----- From: Homme, James
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>Hi Brad,
>Beautiful. The only reason I caught it was that my coffee is 
>beginning to work.
>
>Jim
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>Jim,
>
>Good catch. So much for using  fingers on both hands to count lol. 
>Here we are:
>
>>No more cricket's song
>>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>>Flakes close automn's baggy eyes
>
>Brad
>
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>On 10/18/2011  06:05 AM Homme, James said...
>>Hi Brad,
>>Very good, but the last line has six syllables.
>>
>>Jim
>>
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>>Sent: Monday, October 17, 2011 5:53 PM
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>>
>> >I dont' think I've ever written one until now. Using the info
>> >Bridgit posted  for traditional guidelines such as no rhyme element
>> >of emotion, seasonal, etc.
>>
>>No more cricket's song
>>Leaves and my heart scrape windblown curbs
>>   Flakes close the eyes of fall
>>
>>Brad
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