[stylist] my entry1 weird thanksgiving

[Ashley Bramlett]

Bejas,

good story; you'll grow up to be a writer.
Toward the end though, I think we need a little more background on the other
girls to know who they are and the relationship to the main two girls.
Good start, and I hope you finish the story.
And if you edit or add more, please share.

Ashley

-----Original Message----- 
From: vejas
Sent: Wednesday, November 21, 2012 6:58 PM
To: stylist at nfbnet.org ; bpollpeter at hotmail.com
Subject: [stylist] my entry1 weird thanksgiving

Hi,
I've finally written something.  None of this is based on my real
life, except I did hear that people yesterday were already going
to Thanksgiving sales.
I'm open to any critiques.  Do you feel it was appropriate for me
to include the scene about Spanish class?
Thanks,
Vejas






_______________________________________________
Writers Division web site
http://www.writers-division.net/
stylist mailing list
stylist at nfbnet.org
http://nfbnet.org/mailman/listinfo/stylist_nfbnet.org
To unsubscribe, change your list options or get your account info for
stylist:
http://nfbnet.org/mailman/options/stylist_nfbnet.org/bookwormahb%40earthlink.net