[stylist] 3 Keys To Business Success./Re: new writing prompt

[Brad Dunsé]

Chris,

So sad you had to kill time like that. I suppose 
you forget your keys every so often just to be 
nostalgic? :). Sure  I'd be happy to hear your 
grammar and punctuation input. I'd messed with it 
a bit here and there and think I lost my bearing 
in some areas :). I will say there are sentence 
fragments which I'm not worreid about. That is 
very common in this type of writing. As well 
starting sentences with And" and such. In fact 
it's almost encouraged, to simulate how one 
actually might talk. Bleeding ears for some I'm 
sure :). Nonetheless, sticking as close to the 
rules and still pull that off is best. Let me 
have it when you have time, I appreciate it. 'grin'.


Brad


On 2/3/2012  08:00 AM Chris Kuell said...
>Hey Brad,
>
>This was a very enjoyable read, and quite 
>cleverly done. I love the title, which turns out 
>to be quite fitting. I can certainly relate to 
>the locked-out scenario, as I did it a few 
>winters ago. I had gone to a meeting, returned 
>around 1:00 to discover I had no keys. It was 
>freezing, my neighbors were all at work, so I 
>was forced to walk to a local bar and kill time 
>drinking beer until my wife came home at 6:00. 
>You do have a few grammar and punctuation 
>errors, which I'd be happy to point out to you 
>if you plan on doing anything with this.
>
>Great job.
>
>chris
>
>
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