[stylist] Poem: Inspiration

[Chris Kuell]

Linda,

This poem is kind of whimsical, and I enjoyed it. I don't know if you are 
looking for feedback, but I think you could improve the rhythym here and 
there. One place would be to use underneath instead of under it. That's a 
tiny change, but to me, it sounds better. I also think the last line is a 
little flat. Consider something like: He smiled, or, He laughed
at the new box of Cracker Jacks.

Thanks for sharing,

chris