[stylist] Quick bit/Re: Changes writing prompt

[Chris Kuell]

Hey Brad,

I really enjoyed this story. Yes, it's rough, but it's got a good voice to 
it, it's quirky and it kept my attention all the way. I don't know if you 
plan on editing it at all, but if you do, I found the paragraph about his 
getting his degree and working on the campus, etc... a bit clunky. If you 
kept it that he worked at the power plant it would be less ambigious. And 
you might try to think of alternate ways of saying that he felt like 
something was watching him. The spider bit was great, in fact, I feel one on 
my back right now. Grin.

Excellent job, and you get 2 bonus points for speediness.

chris