[stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes prompt)

[Robert Leslie Newman]

Young mister V
RE: a challenge 

You are a very creative thinker. Your story about king  Peeley is a story
more about a story, rather then a story that happens in real time with
characters moving, breathing and doing what you say they did. What do you
think I mean? (I'm one of your biggest fans)


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Sent: Saturday, January 14, 2012 9:58 AM
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Subject: [stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes prompt)

This story has to do more with personality change.  Since I have lots going
on, I don't have time to make a new one.  I wrote this in seventh grade for
social studies and expanded upon it.  
Suggestions for changes to the writing are more than welcome.
Vejas
PS I think my personality change might be a bit unrealistic.  
Bridgit, feel free to comment to the list.