[stylist] Changes poem, Shawn

[Chris Kuell]

Hey Shawn,

I like this poem a lot. I believe the formatting got screwed up by the time 
it looped the earth a few times and landed on my desktop, but I can imagine 
where I'd/you'd put the line breaks and it reads very well. I like that you 
never tell the reader that it's a roller-coaster (and I'm going to look 
stupid if it isn't) and the narrator is at an amusement park. The only 
correction I'd make is to use descent (d e s c e n t) instead of decent.

Thanks for sharing.

chris