[stylist] Comments on changes poem

[Brad Dunsé]

A Disney poem? 'grin'. I'm  not qualified for a 
poem evaluation either. I will say I remember 
similar rides, back when I'd ride them, maybe 
again, we'll see. 'grin'. Almost felt my stomach 
wince after reaching the top and starting the drop and roll  bit there.

Brad

>Ok.  I decided to put together a changes poem of my own.
>
>The Kraken in Evening
>
>The track before us
>ephemeral as faerie
>we will travel soon.
>
>The part in evening shadows dwindles below.
>Rattling, cricking, clanking we ascend past lights beginning to glow.
>The tension ratchets up as we climb; the top grows near. And then we
>reach the top the world below us, a short drop, turn, and?.
>
>In a mystery
>of motion and gravity
>the world turns round us.
>
>Dropping into the loop we turn and roll following the faerie track.
>Twisting fast, no time for perspective just motion ever changing. With
>joy and fear we face the next decent. In constraints yet free we soar
>back to the sky. Now underground now flung high in the air, then through
>a cave and out to a twisting roll and finally we slow and stop.  We?re
>at the end.
>
>Joy and fear?s abode
>we salute you and travel
>to new attractions.
>
>Shawn
>
>
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