[stylist] Shadow Walker
Chris Kuell
ckuell at comcast.net
Sat Jan 28 20:35:46 UTC 2012
Hey Kyle,
I am not a poet, and don't feel qualified to critique or offer advice for
your poem. What I will say is that you have an old voice in your poems, at
least the 2 you have shared with us. This is a bleak poem, and much of it
doesn't resonate with my experiences. However, the line - The general
populace is ignorant of me - certainly does. The line I like best in the
poem is - So who am I this sweeper of streets, which I like a lot. That I
can connect to.
Thanks for sharing.
chris
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