[stylist] Shadow Walker

Chris Kuell ckuell at comcast.net
Sat Jan 28 20:35:46 UTC 2012


Hey Kyle,

I am not a poet, and don't feel qualified to critique or offer advice for 
your poem. What I will say is that you have an old voice in your poems, at 
least the 2 you have shared with us. This is a bleak poem, and much of it 
doesn't resonate with my experiences. However, the line - The general 
populace is ignorant of me - certainly does. The line I like best in the 
poem is - So who am I this sweeper of streets, which I like a lot. That I 
can connect to.

Thanks for sharing.

chris



 





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