[stylist] Another story

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

I am attaching a story I submitted several years ago to the writer's contest.

Recently, I used it in a writer's workshop at Balticon (a local science fiction convention); we read the first few paragraphs of our work; then we went out and savaged each others stuff in the spirit of constructive criticism.  As a result, I decided to clean the story up and hope to send it out to magazines in the near future.

Please let me know what you think.

Shawn Jacobson
Mathematical Statistician
Phone# (202)-475-8759
Fax# (202)-485-0275

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