[stylist] song submissions

[vejas]

Hi,
Speaking of songs, I'm actually an ammature songwriter.  Attached 
are 2 (of 4) that I wrote.
The first one, "Star Light Star Bright", really does exist, but 
it's short, so I added a story to it, in which somebody was 
wishing stuff on the star and failed miserably.  I wrote it in 
the summer before seventh grade and performed it at a mini talent 
show my brother, cousins and I performed for the adults and older 
cousins who were visiting for Easter.
The second, "Why did you Run Away, Mae?" is sad, I know.  I wrote 
it right after seventh grade when I had lots of stuff going on in 
my life (and after I wrote it I cried.)
Keep in mind, for the first one you probably know the tune, but 
I've sung the second one too.  They still do work as poems.
Is there any way I can improve these?
Thanks.
Vejas
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