[stylist] Aine prompt on gratitude: poem

[Lynda Lambert]

I agree with you Chris! The other things that makes me like this section is 
that is takes us into her thought process - giving it that postmodern 
sensibility of layering the thoughts amid the events and bringing our 
consciousness back to the fact that this is  person writing a poem - the 
actual action of the activity embeddeded within the poem being written.
Lynda






----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Chris Kuell" <ckuell at comcast.net>
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Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2012 9:05 AM
Subject: Re: [stylist] Aine prompt on gratitude: poem


> Hi Aine,
>
> I think you did a nice job with this poem, and like others, I especially 
> liked the lines:
> I've thought of 5 full stanzas, but have yet
> To work out how to thank you; you're one of a few
> I can never repay.
> This works so well because often times, when we really care for someone 
> who has helped us so much, 'thank you' just isn't powerful enough to say 
> how we really feel. I think this poem was probably the perfect way for you 
> to show your coach your gratitude.
>
> chris
>
>
>
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