[stylist] thanks for the comments, plus more on male and female gender

[vejas]

Hi,
I appreciate that you enjoyed my story and took the time to make 
comments, especially since today is Thanksgiving (but it'll 
probably be tomorrow by the time you see it lol.)
Robert and Chris, thanks for the grammatical corrections.
Eve and Chris, yes, it would have been strange for a textbook to 
have swear words.  Therefore I could maybe have the teacher print 
out a sheet with the words and want the kids to learn them.
Eve, both Milena and Danny were to blame in this scene.  Milena 
was mad because Danny climbed onto the fountain and she wanted it 
all for herself.  But in adition, Danny splashed her and she 
pushed him.
So about this gender thing.  It's a subject that I'm quite 
interested in.  In doing research for it, I've come up with 
different opinions of this.  First there's the clueless people 
that go "it's the man's choice because the male determines the x 
or y chromosome." Many say that losing a child is common and 
there's no proof that people can carry a certain gender.  But 
then there are people who have had a long list of children, and 
one gender survives and another is always lost.
In my character's case, since multiple-birth pregnancies are so 
risky, it was most likely an unlucky coincidence that the 2 that 
were lost were just boys.  I used this to show the reason why 
Danny's sisters and mother valued him so much.
Have a great rest of the break.
Vejas