[stylist] My attempt at poetry

[Lynda Lambert]

Very funny! You did a great job - very clever. I like the internal dialogue 
throughout the poem.

Lynda




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From: "Bridgit Pollpeter" <bpollpeter at hotmail.com>
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Sent: Saturday, April 06, 2013 4:09 AM
Subject: [stylist] My attempt at poetry


> Okay, I'm totally a novice, but since so many of you have posted poems,
> and in honor of poetry month, here's my crack at a poem.
>
> Oh man I could really use a beer
> All day long I sat on my ass reading,
> Stupid Psych chapters,, I wish I wasn't here
>
> Maybe I'll change my name to Vladimer,
> Find a cute girl and begin breeding
> Man I could use that beer
>
> It feels like I haven't been to a pub in a year
> Holy shit, is that woman breast feeding?
> I might be too drunk and just need to get out of here
>
> On my way out I take a look in the mirror,
> And realize my face is bleeding
> Oh man I could really use a beer
>
> Went back to One-eyed Jake's looking for that dear,
> hottie with the smile, but her boyfriend is impeding,
> all my moves.  Oh man, I wish he wasn't here
>
> All these dudes think they're tough, but I show no fear
> Even when their knuckles are kneading,
> My face into dough.  Oh man I could really use a beer
> Can someone call a doctor?  I wish I wasn't here.
>
> Bridgit
>
>
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