[stylist] For One night-story

[Chris Kuell]

Tessa,

Thanks for gathering your courage and sharing your work with us. It's 
obvious to me that you are a romance writer at heart, and of course, romance 
is probably the largest selling genre of fiction. You have already received 
some excellent advice from other members, so I won't bother to critique your 
story here. I'll just remind you to show when possible, rather than tell so 
much, and watch out for wordiness.

Thanks again for sharing.

chris