[stylist] Brown winter poem

[Eve Sanchez]

SHWN, I AGREE WITH CHRIS, ESPECIALLY SEEING YOUR RESPONSE. I LIKE THAT IT
HAS A LARGER MEANING OF TIME AND THINK THAT IF YOU REFLECT ON IT A BIT YOU
WILL FIND A WAY TO GIVE THE READER THE UNDERSTANDING NEEDED TO SEE THAT
TIME JUMP. YOU EXPLANATION OF WHAT YOU WERE STRIVING FOR JUST MAKES ME LIKE
IT MORE AND ALSO MAKES ME WANT MORE FROM IT. EVE

On Tue, Feb 12, 2013 at 8:15 AM, Chris Kuell <ckuell at comcast.net> wrote:

> Shawn,
>
> I usually read and comment on someone's submission before I read anyone
> else's comments so my mind is clear and unbiased. So after I posted, I read
> other's comments, and saw your poem in a new light. I think it could
> probably be worded in a way to make your point clearer, but perhaps not. As
> I've said before, I'm not a poet and often scratch my head while
> thinking--hunh?
>
> chris
>
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>
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