[stylist] Brown winter poem

[Chris Kuell]

Shawn,

I usually read and comment on someone's submission before I read anyone 
else's comments so my mind is clear and unbiased. So after I posted, I read 
other's comments, and saw your poem in a new light. I think it could 
probably be worded in a way to make your point clearer, but perhaps not. As 
I've said before, I'm not a poet and often scratch my head while 
thinking--hunh?

chris