[stylist] CK prompt response

[Lynda Lambert]

I think you have something there, Vejas. Yes, it is Black Humor, too. 
Raunchy humor.
Lynda Lambert
104 River




----- Original Message ----- 
From: "vejas" <brlsurfer at gmail.com>
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Sent: Tuesday, February 12, 2013 3:56 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] CK prompt response


> Yes, I see the story as sad, but I find it as kind of like dark humor. 
> Dark, because he calls his computer "Mr.  Computer", and mentions his 
> "friend Jack Daniels." I don't know, I just feel like it's really black 
> humor, like, really punchy and with attitude.
> Maybe I'm wrong.  That's just how I feel.  But either way, I liked it.
> Vejas
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> From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com
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> Date sent: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 12:52:07 -0600
> Subject: [stylist] CK prompt response
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> Vejas,
>
> I'm not sure where you find humor in this.  Can you point out sections
> where you find it? Perhaps we can find a different interpretation if you
> expand your comments a bit more.
>
> I see this as a rather dark piece especially considering the lyrics
> Chris uses.  He's inside the mind of an alcoholic upset with his partner,
> assuming they are cheating, and the narrator is spiraling down into a
> drunken stupor, which he feels, is their true nature.
>
> Bridgit
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> Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 07:47:31 -0800
> From: vejas <brlsurfer at gmail.com
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> Chris,
> I really liked your story.
> Whether this story is true or not, it just goes to show you that
> you often have your off days.  Oftentimes when I have a bad day,
> one bad thing leads to another (sometimes it starts with me
> forgetting to set my alarm.) So I like that what you did was,
> even though it was not going well for you at all, you put humor
> into it.  I feel like you absolutely need humor when you're
> feeling low, because without it it just gets worse.
> Vejas
>
>
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