[stylist] CK prompt response

[vejas]

Yes, I see the story as sad, but I find it as kind of like dark 
humor.  Dark, because he calls his computer "Mr.  Computer", and 
mentions his "friend Jack Daniels." I don't know, I just feel 
like it's really black humor, like, really punchy and with 
attitude.
Maybe I'm wrong.  That's just how I feel.  But either way, I 
liked it.
Vejas
 ----- Original Message -----
From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org
Date sent: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 12:52:07 -0600
Subject: [stylist] CK prompt response

Vejas,

I'm not sure where you find humor in this.  Can you point out 
sections
where you find it? Perhaps we can find a different interpretation 
if you
expand your comments a bit more.

I see this as a rather dark piece especially considering the 
lyrics
Chris uses.  He's inside the mind of an alcoholic upset with his 
partner,
assuming they are cheating, and the narrator is spiraling down 
into a
drunken stupor, which he feels, is their true nature.

Bridgit
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Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 07:47:31 -0800
From: vejas <brlsurfer at gmail.com
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Subject: Re: [stylist] CK prompt response
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Chris,
I really liked your story.
Whether this story is true or not, it just goes to show you that
you often have your off days.  Oftentimes when I have a bad day,
one bad thing leads to another (sometimes it starts with me
forgetting to set my alarm.) So I like that what you did was,
even though it was not going well for you at all, you put humor
into it.  I feel like you absolutely need humor when you're
feeling low, because without it it just gets worse.
Vejas


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