[stylist] not another convention notice

[Eve Sanchez]

Jaquelin, it is a skill worth having, but difficult to attain. I do
not have the technology Bridget mentioned and please do not get me
started on rehab. Some day maybe, but for now, it is a great exercise
that I recommend for everyone. Thanks all for your comments. Bridget,
you must read each line separately. There are different sounds from
different sources. Basically it is describing, in its shortness, the
activity of life and the world that is unseen by some due to whatever
barriers they have whether self imposed or not. Eve

On Thu, Jun 27, 2013 at 10:43 AM, Jacqueline Williams
<jackieleepoet at cox.net> wrote:
> Eve,
> What a charming little poem. The sounds you heard are unusual, and
> particularly the teacher's assignment of using "ip." You have worked it in
> well.
> Also, it is a good strategy for starting to memorize. Rhymes and repetition
> of phrases or lines also help.
> You have given a good prompt to those of us who must stay home.
> Thanks for sharing,
> Jackie
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Eve Sanchez
> Sent: Wednesday, June 26, 2013 9:05 PM
> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
> Subject: [stylist] not another convention notice
>
> Hey all, as someone who does not get to go to Orlandext week, I am
> getting very tired of all of the convention notices and nothing else
> on all of the NFB LISTS serves. Because of this I thought I would post
> something a little different. I have started going to this poetry walk
> group on Wednesday evenings. We take a little walk or hike in a
> different nature type of lccation each week, at sunset and then create
> at that time. We recite and polish. It is fun and inspirational. This
> is the little poem I wrote this evening. When I say 'write' i mean put
> to memory as I have no way of writing and reading without my laptop.
> This actually is a great exercise for me to learn to memorize as I am
> not very good at that. Well, I have attached above and will try to
> past below (if my  computer cooperates).      We did have an
> assignment from the group leader to use "ip" in the piece in whatever
> way we find appropriate.  Hope this puts a smile on those that are
> likewise not going to convention and may form as inspiration for those
> that do.
>
> Take Notice
>
> Wind singing in the boughs,
> "Che che che che che che."
> "Jiju jiju." ,
> Calls the unseen crawlers.
> "Twee twee, ip ip ip ip, caw.",
> On the wing.
> All unnoticed by hooved grazers,
> Sacred with soulful eyes.
> Imprisoned behind
> Four strands of barbs
> While the sun sets
> On another day.
>
>
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