[stylist] Sharing a pantoum Azure Skies Jackie

[KajunCutie926 at aol.com]

What a beautiful thing to say... a beautiful mind.  You have made me  smile.
Thank you!
Myrna
 
 
In a message dated 3/25/2013 11:20:12 A.M. Central Daylight Time,  
jackieleepoet at cox.net writes:

Myrna,
This is a beautiful pantoum. The thoughts and the imagery  are magnified by
the form you chose. The form can also be used to hammer  down unpleasant
thoughts such as spousal abuse, because of the repetitive  quality of the
form, and the repetitive quality of the cycle of violence. I  have such a 
one
in my manuscript, "Run, Quail, Run." My feeling is that  this group likes
beautiful ethereal subjects and like my own critique  group, does not like 
to
hear the other side of the beauty coin.
May I  call yours a beautiful mind?
It is definitely inspirational. I loved  Lynda's critique, so in depth, and
giving an appreciation of the deeper  meanings of color.
Jackie

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Subject: [stylist] Sharing a pantoum Azure  Skies

Okay here is my last pantoum which I believe was written about  three 
months 
ago...  I also attached it as  a rich text  file...

Azure Skies

That I could soar across  azure  skies
To leave my thoughts upon zephyr's breeze
And ask no quarter   or compromise
When night time comes and darkness bleeds

To leave  my  thoughts upon zephyr's breeze
Brush stroked dreams, watercolor  hued
When  night time comes and darkness bleeds
Upon the echo of my  soul  renewed

Brush stroked dreams, watercolor hued
They fill  the heart  where grief had grown
Upon the echo of my soul  renewed
The truth of these  thoughts unknown

They fill the  heart where grief had grown
And ask no  quarter or compromise
The  truth of these thoughts unknown
That I could  soar across azure  skies


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