[stylist] new poem

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

I liked the poem, though, as you've heard from others, the line length is a bit off (especially in stanza 2).

Shawn

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From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Kyle woodard
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Subject: [stylist] new poem

Hello, here is a new poem I just wrote that I wanted to share and get some feedback on, if you wouldn't mind. It is tentatively called treasure i would appreciate any feedback or thoughts you have on this poem. Later Kyle Woodard


I am silent when others are loud,
I am humble when others are proud.
I sit in silence most of the time,
However I am no voiceless mime.

I talk in the silence when no one is there to listen, I cry in the dark where no one can see my eyes glisten.
I listen to all who smile, cheer worry, cry and doubt, I give wisdom and comfort to those who seek me out.

So who am I this selfless wonder?
So what am I some precious jewel or pirates plunder?
To what name do I give myself?
I am nothing more than an old dusty book on the shelf


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Wallace Kyle Woodard IV
(512) 992-6346
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