[stylist] be warned kind of creepy

[Eve Sanchez]

It started out very beautifully, but I lost where it was going after a bit.
The "creepy crawly" words seemed to not fit to me and there were a few
places I would have reworded just to get the right syllable flow. But what
disturbed me was how it seemed the meaning changed. It first sounded very
spiritual, and then ended as some bible/sunday school lesson. Was that your
intent all along? Not sure. Eve

On Thu, Mar 28, 2013 at 12:29 PM, Kyle woodard <wallacewoodard at gmail.com>wrote:

> Ok it's not usually my habbit to write creepy, dark or morbit poetry.
> However this poem or song or whaterver it is speaks to me for some reason
> and it is almost as if it rights itself it is very long and I am not quite
> sure what to do with it but thought I would share to get some opinions.
> some potential tieles are ghost ship, ghost story, and Demon Dance  and it
> is comprised of mostly all quatrains with a couple of couplets
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> AR 4.0
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> Kindred spirits one and all
> here we are let us fall
> we have traveled far together
> now we shall die and live forever
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> Seeking something out of sight
> giving up too tired to fight
> When the age has come and gone
> We shall still be singing our song
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> For some things don’t end with death
> For some things aren’t finished with a breath
> Creepy crawly all around
> Listen to us now making our sound
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> So what possessed us to be this way
> Haunting the world all night and day
> stories only tell one side of things
> leaving not q few loose strings
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> All of the answers to soothe your dreams
> lie tied up amidst twisted schemes
> IF you take one lesson from our song
> be aware that some decisions are wrong
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> We are past fixing our fate
> however there is still room on your plate
> So take heed and don’t follow us here
> some times it is good to have some fear
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> Turn away now from our doom
> Walk away from this room
> For if you stay here any longer
> we shall win growing stronger
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> Don’t follow us whatever you do
> and on the way out be sure to say Boo
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> It wasn’t initially our goal
> to lose our body without a soul
> however after all of our skirmishes and fighting
> we were left squabbling and back biting
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> Filled with hunger and greed
> trying to fill an empty need
> Once the darkness has a hold
> you grow bitter and your heart goes cold
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> Then you know you’re in a bind
> when you’d walk all over your own kind
> just to hold on to a bit of treasure
> just for a wee moments pleasure
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> But that’s the way we all went
> till we were all gone and downward sent
> now accursed to walk these shores
> coming a knocking on your doors
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> Be aware children run away
> only come out at the noon of day
> for if you are caught outside
> we’ll take you on a wild ride
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> one you won’t be forgeettign soon
> as we contemplate forthcoming doom
> run away and hide right quick
> watching out for us that slick
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> Now be good little kiddies and mind your manners
> Making sure to flee our banners
> for only time will tell
> whether you go to heaven or hell
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> So make up your mind and stick to it fast
> turn away from sin and make it your past
> or else we will come a calling
> we have no shame in helping you falling
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> So flee flee right now
> just open your bible to find out how
> Now we have come to the end of our tale
> but if you care to stay we have a spot open in our jail
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> Wallace Kyle Woodard IV
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> (512) 992-6346
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