[stylist] a double triolet?

[KajunCutie926 at aol.com]

Barbara, very nicely done!  I have not done a triolet in years  and it is 
always a pleasure to read one so well crafted.. and a double at  that!
Myrna
 
 
In a message dated 10/16/2013 9:49:06 P.M. Central Daylight Time,  
poetlori8 at msn.com writes:

I’ve not  seen much here lately so thought I’d contribute my attempt at a  
triolet.
Actually, it’s a double triolet?

BUT I  CAN'T
by Barbara Hammel

If I could have just one more  chance
To be the child I was of yore,
I would choose a different  dance
If I could have just one more chance.
I'd face life with a  different stance,
I'd grasp the knob of another door,
If I could have  just one more chance,
To be the child I was of yore.

To be the child  I was of yore,
If I could have just one mmor chance,
I'd love to walk  back through that door
To be the child I was of yore.
I'd love to live  that time once more,
But approach it with a different stance.
To be the  child I was of yore.
If I could have just one more  chance.


Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net  down.--Robert  Frost
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