[stylist] a double triolet?

[Vejas]

I really like the poem.  How do you make a troilet?
Vejas


 ----- Original Message -----
From: "Barbara Hammel" <poetlori8 at msn.com
To: <stylist at nfbnet.org
Date sent: Wed, 16 Oct 2013 21:48:10 -0500
Subject: [stylist] a double triolet?

I’ve not seen much here lately so thought I’d contribute my 
attempt at a triolet.
Actually, it’s a double triolet?

  BUT I CAN'T
  by Barbara Hammel

If I could have just one more chance
To be the child I was of yore,
I would choose a different dance
If I could have just one more chance.
I'd face life with a different stance,
I'd grasp the knob of another door,
If I could have just one more chance,
To be the child I was of yore.

To be the child I was of yore,
If I could have just one mmor chance,
I'd love to walk back through that door
To be the child I was of yore.
I'd love to live that time once more,
But approach it with a different stance.
To be the child I was of yore.
If I could have just one more chance.


Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net 
down.--Robert Frost
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