[stylist] a horror story for Halloween
Sophie Trist
sweetpeareader at gmail.com
Sat Oct 26 18:38:06 UTC 2013
Vejas, I read your story and thought it was very well-written.
However, none of the characters were very sympathetic. I didn't
like any of them, so they didn't spark my emotions. Also, the
ending was a bit predictable in my opinion. All that being said,
I thought it was a good story that definitely gave me the chills.
Best of luck in future writing,
Sophie
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