[stylist] a horror story for Halloween

[Sophie Trist]

Vejas, I read your story and thought it was very well-written. 
However, none of the characters were very sympathetic. I didn't 
like any of them, so they didn't spark my emotions. Also, the 
ending was a bit predictable in my opinion. All that being said, 
I thought it was a good story that definitely gave me the chills.

Best of luck in future writing,
Sophie