[stylist] suggestions on this short story
justin williams
justin.williams2 at gmail.com
Sun Feb 2 18:00:14 UTC 2014
That same issue happens with outlook in the inbox if you send an email that
is too long. I've started wending any long documents in attachments.
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From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Vejas
Sent: Sunday, February 02, 2014 12:58 PM
To: Writer's Division Mailing List
Subject: Re: [stylist] suggestions on this short story
Bridgit,
I sent you the story into your hotmail. I, too, have issues with my
braille-note. When I send too much text in an e-mail, only a certain amount
will come through, which means that if I wanted to send the whole story I
would have to divide it into 2 or more separate e-mails.
In answer to your questions:
1. No, we don't actually have to write about romantic love.
However, our assignment is that we have to write a collection.
Besides this piece I already have 1 other short story and 1 poem and have to
write several others. That being said, I latch on to any ideas, LOL. I
find it hard to think of the various topics to write about, and in the next
9 days I have to think of several other characters, plots, etc. I may write
a few more poems but I really have just started getting into poetry.
2. As far as why the female perspective... Originally, I wanted to just
keep the story neutral. But I realifor that it was easier to stick to one
character. And in much of what I've read, it's usually the male who rejects
the female without warning; the woman thinks the relationship is wonderful.
That's what I was trying to show. It is still a third-person piece, it just
has more of the girl, Gisela's thoughts.
It's a fun elective class... just seems like we have a project to complete
all the time... grin Vejas
----- Original Message -----
From: Bridgit Pollpeter <bpollpeter at hotmail.com
To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org Date sent: Sun, 2
Feb 2014 00:13:51 -0600
Subject: Re: [stylist] suggestions on this short story
Outlook screwy, got it now, grin.
Bridgit
-----Original Message-----
From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Vejas
Sent: Saturday, February 01, 2014 2:35 PM
To: stylist at nfbnet.org
Subject: [stylist] suggestions on this short story
Hi all,
I am writing a story for class about love. I would really like
suggesttions on it.
I have never been in a relationship, so don't know how good my
descriptions are. Also I really don't like my ending-so I'd
really like some suggesttions.
Also note that although this is a third-person narrative, this is
largely written using the girl's thoughts.
I have to turn it in in 10 days, so there's time.
Thanks.
Vejas
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