[stylist] a different take on archaeology

[Barbara HAMMEL]

It could be enough that he was drinking. Some folks are horribly mean whan they drink but otherwise fairly decent people. Len maybe left him because he so wanted to do his thing and maybe Grandpa had been sober for some time but something Len didn't know about happened to make him start again. My grampa was not a nice man but he'd quit drinking before I was old enough to remember but he'd have done some time in our age for leaving his kids in the truck while he went in to drink. Fortunately when my father drank he was a happy drunk and was not abusive. The other thing is John had the night to mellow and abusive people do tend to overdue the niceness to make up for what they've done.

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> On May 3, 2014, at 6:04 PM, "Bridgit Pollpeter" <bpollpeter at hotmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Chris,
> 
> I like your use of diction; very descriptive, such as:
> 
> small pile of sun 
> dried boards in a thick bramble of grass. 
> 
> Silent tears 
> glistened on Dean's face. His nostrils filled with a raw, earthy stench.
> A 
> smooth, glassy coldness filled his mouth. 
> 
> They shot out like bolts of 
> lightening now, crackling and hissing, completely covering that pristine
> 
> glass with a spider web of fine capillaries. 
> 
> Sections like the following clue us into era without having to actually
> tell us:
> 
> On the radio, Joe Nuxhall 
> announced the Big Red Machine's starting line up as they took the field 
> against the Mets on this sunny afternoon. 
> 
> I don't think you need descriptions like the following because we
> already see this personality in Dean through his actions. It can become
> redundant to show us as well as tell us.
> 
> Dean was a good natured kid, and his anger dissipated with time. 
> 
> Would Dean's parents really leave him with this man? Especially Len, who
> obviously experienced the same treatment as a boy.
> 
> After Grandpa retrieves Dean from the well, we see a different side of
> John, but I think there's more potential for this. And also, I don't
> think we need authorial interjection stating how Dean notices the
> difference because this is more for the benefit of the reader, and we
> already see the change of character.
> 
> Can Grandpa have some more complexity? My paternal grandpa was similar
> to this character. He didn't drink, but he was a real hard-ass who
> thought he had the right to hit and knock me around if he deemed I was
> misbehaving. Until a few years ago, I saw very little to like in my
> grandpa. And yet, he displayed some complexity as most people do. After
> the passing of my grandma, he kep many items of hers he had once mocked,
> and he cared for his father-in-law until his death, visiting him, caring
> for his house and well-being, even placing him in a home when the time
> came, and continued to visit him. With my youngest cousin, born when I
> was 17, my grandpa finally demonstrated some grand-fatherly affection
> and love towards my cousin, never missing a game or school function with
> him.
> 
> My point being, can you give us more complexity? The dinner scene has
> potential for this. Or when he mentions the torture the Japanese
> performed for POW's, implying John endured this. Something, even in his
> gruff way, to display some complexity in this character. We don't have
> to like him and can still be appalled with his behavior, but it would be
> nice to have a more three-dimensional character in John.
> 
> When John offers an arrowhead to Dean, I see it as John's way of
> apologizing. I'm in no way defending this character or condoning his
> behavior, but we see more depth in John after retrieving Dean from the
> well.
> 
> For me, this level of depth in such a despicable character is more
> poignant and emotional than the scenes where John is abusing Dean. I
> find more heart in this depth along with the older Deans character than
> the flashback to John's abusive behavior.
> 
> The one little sentence about Dean's father having a look like before he
> yells at Dean or Mommy gives us a clue that perhaps Dean's father can
> perpetuate  this abusive behavior even if not as bad as John.
> 
> I like how you frame the story with Dean and his son. I really like
> framing devices, and it shows us how Dean has grown. Great ending
> sentence too.
> 
> I was not as emotionally moved as some when reading about John's
> behavior towards Dean or Dean's ordeal in the well, though it certainly
> evoked something and is well-written. I'm more moved with Dean's
> reaction towards his own son, and how Dean seems to have broken the
> cycle of hard-assed, abusive fathers.
> 
> Over-all really good job, and I enjoyed reading this, as much as one can
> enjoy reading about such aspects of human nature, smile.
> 
> Bridgit
> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Chris
> Kuell
> Sent: Thursday, May 01, 2014 12:18 PM
> To: Writer's Division Mailing List
> Subject: [stylist] a different take on archaeology
> 
> 
> 
> A couple days ago, Bill posted an interesting poem in which he used 
> archaeology to indicate the passage of time and the wearing down of
> things. 
> It made me think of a story I wrote a while back, in which I used 
> archaeology both literally, and also to mean 'the preservation of'. It
> was 
> originally published in the anthology "Mountain Voices: Illuminating the
> 
> Character of West Virginia" and I'll paste it below, for anyone who is 
> interested in reading. It's on the longish side, at 5600 words.
> 
> 
> Down Home Archaeology
> 
> By Chris Kuell
> 
> 
> "Daddy, Daddy!" called the little sandy haired boy in a Sponge Bob T
> shirt. 
> The boy's parents stood chatting with the real estate agent. "C'mere,
> Dad! C'mere!" The insistent boy grabbed his father's hand and 
> pulled.
> "Excuse me for a second, I'll be right back." Turning to his son, Dean 
> Henderson said, "What is so important you have to interrupt me like
> that?" "C'mere Daddy. You gotta see this. It's so cool." The boy pulled
> Dean along. Frustrated by the slow progress, Tyler let go and 
> sprinted to a corner of the backyard. He squatted near a small pile of
> sun 
> dried boards in a thick bramble of grass. Dean approached, expecting to
> be 
> shown a snakeskin or maybe a bird's nest. As he got closer, Dean saw his
> son 
> peering over the rim of an abandoned well. Panic catapulted him into
> action. "Tyler!" he yelled, racing towards the boy with a speed and
> purpose he hadn't 
> mustered since high school. Tyler's eyes opened wide as his father
> scooped 
> him up and clutched the small body tightly to his chest. Silent tears 
> glistened on Dean's face. His nostrils filled with a raw, earthy stench.
> A 
> smooth, glassy coldness filled his mouth. He shut his eyes and dropped
> to 
> his knees, holding the boy close.
> * * * * *
> It was early summer, 1972, and six year old Dean Henderson sat unbuckled
> 
> next to his father, Len, in the family station wagon. The father son
> team 
> was headed to Grandpa's house in Fairmont. On the radio, Joe Nuxhall 
> announced the Big Red Machine's starting line up as they took the field 
> against the Mets on this sunny afternoon. Dean was excited, and a little
> 
> nervous. His Mom had gone to her ten year high school reunion, which his
> Dad 
> had no interest in attending. Instead, the boys of the family were going
> to 
> Grandpa's for the first time in almost four years. Dad was going to
> leave 
> Dean at Grandpa's while he visited some of his old friends. Len
> Henderson 
> told his wife that they were going fishing, but Dean noticed Daddy had 
> brought a lot more beer and Fritos than fishing gear.
> The ride was long and boring. His Dad didn't talk much; he was too
> focused 
> on the ballgame and driving to pay Dean any mind. Tom Seaver had pitched
> a 
> no hitter through six innings for the Mets, and Len was disgusted. Dean 
> occupied his time counting cars, looking through his collection of rocks
> and 
> imagining the fun he would have at Grandpa's farm. Daddy had told him
> that 
> arrowheads galore could be found at the farm, and Dean was anxious to
> start 
> looking.
> They arrived at Grandpa's late in the afternoon. The Henderson place was
> a 
> typical farmhouse built in the early twentieth century. A basic cube
> shape 
> of white-washed clapboards covered by a simple, low-pitched roof, and a 
> chimney perpetually leaning  at a precarious angle.    Dean's
> grandfather 
> had added plumbing in the forties, but, other than that, only
> superficial 
> modifications had been made. Dean's Grandpa, John Henderson, met them at
> the 
> door of the old place. He wore thinning, sky-blue overalls with a dark 
> rectangle in the chest where a label used to be.
> Len and John Henderson shook hands, then Dean went to hug his Grandpa
> but 
> the old man didn't even bend over. He just stared at Dean in a cool way,
> as 
> if he was a stray dog that might crap on his lawn. Uncertain how to
> proceed, 
> Dean just hugged the old man's thighs and said a friendly hello. They
> sat in the front room, the television off, strained chitchat 
> intermittently flowing between the two adults. Dean kicked his sneakered
> 
> feet up and down, as if he were on his backyard swing. He tossed an 
> embroidered pillow up into the air and practiced catching. Grandpa
> scowled 
> at the child.
> Dean looked over to his Dad during one pause and asked, "Daddy, can I go
> 
> look around?"
> Grandpa said, "Don't you go gettin' into trouble. You hear me boy?"
> Dean's father put a comforting hand on his shoulder. "Why don't you just
> 
> hunt around out back, see what you can find. Don't get into any of
> Grandpa's 
> equipment, though, you hear?"
> "Yes sir," Dean answered, already making his way to the door. Dean was
> busy digging at the edge of a cornfield with a favorite rock he 
> called Digger when his father came to say goodbye.
> "What you doing, Deano?"
> Dean smiled up at his idol. "I'm finding you some worms for fishing."
> The 
> boy put a hand in one pocket and pulled out a fist full of dirt and 
> wriggling earthworms. Dean's father looked surprised then chuckled and 
> accepted the gift.
> "Now listen, kid. I'm going to meet up with Mr. Wills and some of the
> other 
> guys. You're going to stay here with Grandpa, and I'll be back late 
> tonight." Dean stared intently at his Dad. This was it, he knew. He had
> to 
> be brave for his Daddy.
> "Now, you mind your Grandpa. He can be a crotchety old man, but if you
> just 
> do as you're told and stay outta trouble, everything will be fine." They
> 
> hugged, and Dean watched as his father returned to the station wagon and
> 
> drove away down the dirt road.
> A few minutes later, he heard the shuffle of his grandfather's boots 
> approaching.
> "Hey Grandpa," he said, "Wanna help me dig for arrowheads?"
> "We ain't got time for such foolishness, boy. Come with me over to the
> side 
> of the house. There's a pile of wood needs stacking."
> Eager to help and hopefully get on the old man's good side, Dean ran
> ahead 
> to size up the job. When he rounded the corner of the farmhouse, Dean
> saw 
> what appeared to be a mountain of logs. There were four cords of roughly
> cut 
> wood, dumped by a truck in a mound three times his height. Behind him,
> his Grandpa ordered, "G'won, boy. Grab a handful. See them two 
> trees over yonder? Make a line of wood from one to the other." Dean
> struggled to wrestle a log out of the pile, grunting as he carried it 
> over to the trees. His grandfather watched him, taking five or six
> pieces 
> himself each trip.
> "Boy, is you only going to take one piece at a time? You're going to be
> out 
> here all night at that rate."
> "Grandpa," Dean said, "I'm just a kid."
> "What are you, a little Momma's boy?" the old man snorted. "Come here
> and 
> let me pile you up."
> He had the boy stick out his arms, and then put three pieces in them.
> The 
> edge of the top piece dug into Dean's chest and he let out an, "Owwww!"
> His Grandpa ridiculed him as they stacked more wood. "You better toughen
> up, 
> little boy. I can tell your Daddy's been too easy on you. You're soft,
> just 
> like him. You want your Momma wiping your ass the rest of your life?
> Cripe's 
> sake."
> Dean's face reddened. He wished his Mom and Dad were here to tell
> Grandpa to 
> shut up. Clenching his teeth tightly, he continued with the mundane
> chore of 
> getting wood piled into his arms, walking it over to the growing stack, 
> dropping it on the ground and placing it in the right direction. After a
> half hour or so, Dean worked up the courage to ask, "Hey Grandpa, I'm 
> hungry. Can we have a snack?"
> The old man glared at him with disgust, dropping a sharp piece of wood
> onto 
> the reddening flesh of the child's arms. "Dinner's at five o'clock.
> You'll 
> work 'till then."
> Dean was smart enough not to push it. He pouted and continued stacking
> the 
> endless pile of wood until his Grandpa glanced at the sun and said, "I'm
> 
> gunna go fix supper. You keep stacking until I call you in. Hear me?"
> Dean was mad, so he didn't answer the old man, just dropped his pile and
> 
> placed a knotty piece in its spot. A flash of pain shot through his head
> as 
> a calloused hand twisted his ear.
> "Answer me when I'm talking to you, boy" the old man said.
> Dean dropped the log, crying out in surprise and pain. "Momma's boy,"
> the 
> old man spat as he went around to the front of the house.
> Dean rubbed his sore ear and cried quietly. Why was Grandpa being so
> mean? 
> What kind of vacation was this? He sat, refusing to pick up another
> stick of 
> wood until Grandpa called him in for dinner.
> 
> Dean was a good natured kid, and his anger dissipated with time. He was 
> looking forward to supper as he entered the house, letting the screen
> door 
> slam behind him.
> "Easy on the door boy," his grandpa hollered from the kitchen. Dean
> ignored the grumpy old man and made his way to the bathroom to wash up. 
> When he came out into the kitchen, his Grandpa still looked crabby. In
> fact, 
> the old man's eyes were reddened slits of irritation. He held a spatula
> in 
> one hand, a tumbler of whiskey in the other. Pointing the spatula at
> Dean, 
> he said, "Boy, what the hell is wrong with you? You better git them
> shoes 
> off and leave 'em by the front door. Jesus, look at the dirt your
> highness 
> has drug in the house."
> Dean glanced around, but didn't notice any more dirt on the floor than
> when 
> he came in. Remembering his father's words, he slipped off his Keds and 
> carried them to the mat at the door. Upon returning, Dean took one of
> the 
> chairs at the small kitchen table. His Grandfather carried over two
> plates 
> and put one in front of him. On one part of the plate was a disgusting
> pile 
> of fried liver and onions. Next to that was a spoonful of slimy lima
> beans. 
> Then there was a wrinkly brown thing that Dean mistakenly thought was a
> mud 
> ball. It was actually a shriveled baked potato that John Henderson had 
> cooked for himself but not eaten several days ago. In painful silence,
> the 
> old man started eating his dinner. Dean sat quietly, head bowed, a dour 
> sadness across his face.
> "What's a matter boy? Thought you was hungry." The old man said between 
> bites.
> Eyes still down, Dean said, I don't like this."
> "You ain't even tried it."
> Dean glanced at his plate. The lima beans looked like they were
> somebody's 
> guts, and the liver was somebody's guts. He wasn't going to eat any mud
> ball 
> either. He bit his lower lip and sat pouting.
> "Suit yourself boy. That's all you're getting. You can eat it now, or
> eat it 
> for breakfast, don't matter to me none."
> Grandpa drained his whiskey and poured himself another. The two sat in 
> silence except for the sounds of the old man's chewing. Dean thought
> about 
> his parents and how they usually let him eat a peanut butter sandwich if
> he 
> didn't like what they had.
> "Do you know when my Daddy's coming back?"
> "I don't reckon for a while. He's off getting drunk with Bobby Wills and
> 
> that car stealing Caudell boy."
> Grandpa took another bite of supper and said," C'mon and eat some of
> that 
> liver. It ain't gunna kill ya."
> Dean sat sulking. He wished his Dad would come back and fix him some
> real 
> food. Was he really getting drunk with a car stealer?
> Grandpa spoke again through a mouth half full of food. "If you ain't
> going 
> to eat, git the broom and sweep up the dirt you tracked in here." Dean
> got up and found the broom and dustpan in a closet and tried his best 
> to sweep up around the door in the front room. His Mom and Dad had never
> 
> made him sweep before, so he did his best to mimic what he thought they
> did. 
> After picking up a small pile of dust, he chucked it out the screen
> door. He 
> glanced around the room and saw the pillow he had been tossing earlier
> on 
> the floor instead of on the couch where it belonged. He kicked the
> pillow up 
> onto the couch. It plopped hard into the fat middle of the center
> cushion. 
> It felt good to kick the old man's pillow, so Dean fetched it and
> replaced 
> it on the floor. Dean imagined he was a football kicker, trying for a
> long 
> field goal. He ran up to the pillow, kicked low and hard, the shouting
> crowd 
> behind, cheering him on. The pillow soared straight and true, smacking
> hard 
> into the top part of the couch.
> The next kick was from even further back. This time, the pillow cleared
> the 
> back of the couch, hitting the big picture window with a soft thud. A
> second 
> of panic shot through the boy, but then he realized the pillow was soft
> and 
> wouldn't break anything. He repeated his kicks a few more times, honing
> his 
> technique. Joe Nuxhall's voice played in his brain, as announcer for the
> 
> amazing boy kicker.
> "It's incredible, folks," Joe announced to the crowd. "The youngest 
> professional kicker in football history!"
>  Preparing for his next attempt, Dean had a great idea. To one side of
> the 
> couch was a tall brass floor lamp. Dean relocated it behind the couch, a
> 
> little left of center. Then he balanced the broom to the right behind
> the 
> couch, effectively making goal posts. Now it was getting challenging.
> Like a 
> real pro football kicker, Young Dean Henderson would attempt to kick the
> 
> pillow all the way across the room between the goal posts. The fans in
> his 
> mind were going nuts. "Deano! Deano!" they chanted, using his Daddy's
> pet 
> nickname for him.
> Dean was ready. He called out the signals in his mind, there's the snap,
> and 
> the ball is down, three steps and kick. . . . The pillow caught the left
> 
> instep of Dean's socked foot. Instead of flying straight and splitting
> the 
> goal posts, it hooked left. Dean watched as the pillow drifted towards
> the 
> brass lamp, then smacked it head on. The lamp toppled backwards, a fist 
> sized knob on the top hitting into the window before spinning and
> falling 
> with a crash to the floor.
> For just a second, but plenty of time for his young brain to compute,
> Dean 
> thought it was going to be okay. The lamp had fallen, but the window
> hadn't 
> broken. It was going to be okay; he wouldn't get into trouble. Then, he 
> heard a tiny, cracking sound, like someone breaking a pencil. Before
> him, 
> through that magnificent piece of glass which offered a view of the
> front 
> yard, Grandma's old flower beds, and the plush hill farms beyond, came a
> 
> fine line. Then, a snapping sound, and another line magically appeared 
> before his eyes. More crackling, more lines. They shot out like bolts of
> 
> lightening now, crackling and hissing, completely covering that pristine
> 
> glass with a spider web of fine capillaries. Then, in a final blow to
> the 
> fragment of hope the small boy still held in his heart, the glass obeyed
> the 
> pull of gravity. Thousands of diamond like shards fell to the floor.
> Dean barely heard, and certainly didn't comprehend, the three or four
> heavy 
> footsteps before something solid and angry walloped him in the back of
> the 
> head. The forty eight pound youngster toppled forward, smashing his
> shoulder 
> into the couch and crumpling to the floor.
> "God dammit, boy!" growled the voice.
> Stars spun in Dean's head. Tears streamed and he found his voice for
> crying. 
> A strong farmer's hand clamped down on him and hoisted him into the air.
> 
> Whack! Whack! Whack! The old man spanked him fiercely with his open
> hand. 
> The wails of the child hit a frenzied pitch.
> "I knew you was gunna be nothing but trouble. Well, I'll sure learn ya
> how 
> to behave."
> Dean bawled with the pain, sadness and humiliation. Grandpa dropped him
> to 
> the floor, where upon impact, he bit clean through his bottom lip. The
> old 
> man laced up his boots, teeth clenched, face crimson with fury. John 
> Henderson stood, looked out his broken picture window, then hoisted the 
> limp, cowering body over his shoulder like a sack of seeds. He banged
> the 
> screen door open and stormed out back to his tractor. The jouncing dug a
> 
> bony shoulder into Dean's belly, adding to his overall suffering. The
> old 
> man dropped Dean with a thud into a wood trailer, then jumped into the
> seat 
> of his John Deere. Firing up the tractor, he drove off into the fields.
> Dean continued sobbing, balled up in a protective fetal position. He
> sucked 
> on the blood from his ripped lower lip and drank in the coppery sorrow.
> His 
> Mom and Dad swatted his bottom now and then when he was fresh, or did 
> something dangerous, but they had never come close to the fury John 
> Henderson had just unleashed.
> Five minutes later, the old man whipped the tractor sharply to the right
> and 
> shut off the engine. Dean's crying had subsided to a rhythmic
> whimpering, so 
> he heard Grandpa jump down off the tractor and grunt as he moved
> something. "Boy," he growled, "Git over here." Reluctantly, Dean hoisted
> himself to a sitting position to see what Grandpa 
> wanted. The old man stood next to a big rectangular hole in the ground.
> All 
> the grass at the edges of the hole was dead, brown and flattened. Next
> to 
> the hole on the ground was an old barn door. A spongy fungus grew on one
> 
> edge of the door, as if it had been there a long time.
> "I'm gunna count to three and you better have your ass over here." Dean
> tried to stifle his crying and get up out of the trailer. A dull ache 
> hammered throughout his head; his lip throbbed with every heartbeat.
> Needles 
> of hurt shot through his thighs as he climbed over the railing of the 
> trailer.
> Refusing to look at his grandfather, Dean approached, head down and
> sullen. 
> His eyes were puffy and wet, but he didn't allow new tears to flow. "You
> see this?" Grandpa asked him, finger pointing into the abyss.
> Remembering the painful ear twist, a miniscule "yes" escaped the boy. He
> 
> stepped towards the edge of the hole. It was quite big, maybe twice as
> large 
> as a refrigerator. Layers of dark, rich dirt cascaded downwards towards
> the 
> bottom.
> "Git in, boy," the old man barked.
> Dean glanced up at him. Was he serious? Why did he want him to go down 
> there? If he thought of inquiring, he didn't have a chance. The old
> man's 
> leather boot kicked, propelling him forward. He pitched head first into
> the 
> pit, flipping over and landing on his back some eight feet below.
> Although 
> the ground was moist, the impact still knocked the breath out of him.
> Panic 
> seized Dean as he gasped for air. The old man stuck his face over the
> edge. 
> The eyes that stared down were perfectly calm.
> "The Japs had ways of making prisoners behave. This one's easy, be 
> grateful." The old man dragged the large barn door over the top of the 
> hole, closing it off from the outside world. With that, darkness grew
> over 
> the top of the hole like the moon eclipsing the sun.
> At the bottom of the vault, Dean urgently sucked in the damp, musty air,
> but 
> there just wasn't enough. His heart raced while the darkness weighed
> down 
> upon him. In this tomb, terror gripped like the talons of a large bird. 
> Animal sounds gurgled from deep inside him, sounds which served to
> frighten 
> him more. A clammy sweat sheathed his small body as images of killer 
> spiders, poisonous snakes and boy eating trilobites tormented him. It
> took a few minutes to quiet his fears to a reasonable whimpering. The 
> cool dampness of the dirt penetrated his thoughts and helped to break
> the 
> grip of the talons.
> He took a few deep breaths, and between sobs he tried to yell. "Grandpa,
> let 
> me out."
> He listened, but heard only his pulse beating in his neck and the sounds
> of 
> sorrow coming from inside his chest.
> "Grandpa!" he said, louder this time. "I'm scared. Please let me out!"
> There 
> was no response.
> "I'm sorry I broke your window. I'm really sorry. Please open up." A
> cloak of panic overtook Dean and he started crying again. Hard, racking 
> sobs convulsed through his small body. Sitting on the damp dirt, he
> pulled 
> his knees to his chest and put his head down on his arms. Blubbery snot 
> dripped down his legs, but he didn't care. His six year old body
> trembled 
> like that of a palsied old man.
> "Please," he pleaded to the darkness.
> Time passed, as did the outburst. When Dean had collected himself, he
> tried 
> to contact the outside world again.
> "Grandpa, are you out there?"
> He heard nothing. Had Grandpa left? Dean thought he would have heard the
> 
> tractor. Was he all alone? Out here in the field? An icy shudder
> trickled 
> down his spine.
> "Help!" he screamed. "Help! Help!" He shouted until his throat felt like
> it 
> had been scoured with steel wool, then he collapsed to the ground for 
> another sobbing binge. It was hopeless. John Henderson owned nearly
> fifty 
> acres of land. The closest neighbor was almost a mile away. Sorrow kept 
> bleeding out of the boy; he bit his lower lip and reopened the wound.
> The 
> blood trickled down his chin like wax down a candle.
> At that moment, Dean Henderson was fairly certain he would never get
> out. After the next bawling wave passed, Dean was able to clear some of
> the self 
> pity out of his head and consider possible modes of escape. He stood,
> rubbed 
> some of the soreness out of his legs and jumped towards the top of the
> hole, 
> but it was far out of reach. He tried to climb, but the hard packed mud
> gave 
> no holds. Each attempt only ended in his sliding a few inches back down
> to 
> the bottom. In the darkness, Dean felt his way around searching for 
> something, anything to grab and pull himself upwards. Trembling fingers 
> found nothing but dirt and clay. One end of the prison was lower than
> the 
> other, and about a half inch of muddy water soaked his socked feet.
> Further 
> depressed, he moved back to the dry section and sat, silent tears
> rolling 
> one by one down his cheeks. There was no way a little kid could get out
> of 
> here. In his child's mind, Dean wished he had a rope or something to
> help 
> him escape, but he had nothing except Digger and a few other rocks.
>  He stood, took the rocks out of his pocket and threw them at the old
> door 
> with a scream, "Let me out!"
> The rocks plinked into the door uselessly and fell back to the ground.
> One 
> hit Dean on the head, further infuriating him and bringing on another
> deluge 
> of sadness. Dean sat, curled into a ball, feeling as though he must be
> the 
> sorriest kid in the world. Silent lips worded the name, Momma, over and 
> over.
> At some point later in the night, Dean felt around on the ground until
> he 
> located the familiar curve of Digger. Dean clutched the rock tightly, 
> rubbing one side with a dirty thumb. He needed to hold something of
> comfort 
> in this murky cell. Mindlessly, he used the rock to churn up the dirt
> near 
> where he was sitting. The task occupied his otherwise miserable mind, so
> he 
> began to carve linear trenches in the bottom of the pit. About four rows
> in, 
> he hit something solid, and he dug around it. Expecting a rock, Dean
> felt 
> the object with interest. His fingertips encountered something smooth
> and 
> possibly metallic. Whatever it was, he now had a purpose, and the
> excavation 
> continued. The mystery item was deeper than he expected, so he had to
> use 
> his fingers as well as his rock tool to extricate the find. After about
> ten 
> minutes, he pulled out an object a little smaller than his hand. Dirt
> chunks fell away from various surfaces and he ran his fingers over the 
> treasure. He felt the head, gun and legs of a miniature soldier. It was 
> metal and the limbs wouldn't move, unlike those of the plastic GI Joe he
> had 
> back home. Dean took the soldier, which he named Joe, over to the small
> pool 
> of water and washed him off. He dried and polished him with his shirt,
> proud 
> of his fine work.
> He returned to his spot and resumed digging, Joe acting as job
> supervisor. 
> In the next hour the team unearthed three rocks, a marble and a skeleton
> 
> key. Each item was washed and cleaned with care. Dean convinced himself
> that 
> the key would open up that door, if he could only get to it.
> He took comfort in his treasures, but the hour was late and he grew
> tired of 
> digging. Hunger cramped his empty belly, and on an impulse he popped the
> 
> glass marble into his mouth, rolling it around on his tongue and sucking
> it 
> to placate the pangs. Momma would kill him for putting a marble in his 
> mouth, but he didn't care. He hadn't eaten anything since lunch, and
> Momma 
> was far away. It reminded him of a gumball, or a big jawbreaker, and
> that 
> seemed to ease the discomfort a bit. As the time passed, his sore body
> grew 
> too heavy to hold up and he slumped over onto the dirt. The spit covered
> 
> marble slid harmlessly out of his mouth, and he was swept away into a
> thick, 
> dreamless sleep.
> 
> Dean awoke a few hours later as the first rays of morning beamed into
> the 
> top of his prison. Mercifully, his sleep had been solid, and he hadn't 
> noticed Grandpa removing the heavy door.
> "C'mon, boy. Let's go."
> The old man stooped and reached low into the pit. Dean stood up slowly,
> like 
> a drunk after a night in the tank sleeping it off. He stared up at his 
> grandfather, reluctant to touch that hand. Would he pick him up, just to
> 
> drop him down into the hole again? He decided it was worth the risk. The
> old 
> man hoisted him out of the hole with ease, carried him over and sat him
> on 
> the tractor. He then took a minute and replaced the barn door. He picked
> 
> Dean up and put him down on his lap as he started the tractor. Pulling
> it 
> around, heading for home, he said, "I hope you learned your lesson." A 
> second later, he asked, "Wanna steer the tractor?"
> At any other time, Dean would have wet his pants at the possibility of 
> driving Grandpa's big green tractor. Dean loved cars, trucks and
> machinery. 
> Instead of taking the wheel, though, he just shook his head and
> scratched 
> with dirty fingers at the dried blood on his chin.
> The two traveled wordlessly back to the farmhouse, where Dean noticed 
> Grandpa had covered the broken window with a thick, blue piece of
> tarpaulin. 
> There was no sign of Daddy's car.
> 
> Inside, Grandpa gave him a large glass of orange juice. "Where's my
> Daddy?" he asked the old man. "Ain't back yet. He'll be home shortly."
> Grandpa drew a hot bath and laid out some clean clothes. Dean's Mom or
> Dad 
> usually stayed with him while he was in the tub, talking or singing
> songs to 
> make bath time fun. Grandpa left him alone, saying only that he should
> be 
> sure to scrub his face good, that right now he looked like a has been 
> prizefighter.
> Making his way back towards the front room, Dean was overpowered by the 
> smell of bacon and hot biscuits.
> "I'm making us a nice down home West Virginia breakfast. Is that okay
> with 
> you?" Grandpa looked inquisitively at the boy.
> Dean was starving, so he nodded in assent.
> "Won't be done for a few minutes. Why don't you go watch a little TV
> until I 
> call you."
> Grandpa was noticeably different. He hadn't yelled, pinched his ear, or
> done 
> anything mean this morning. The boy was puzzled, but pleased, so he did
> as 
> he was told.
>  A short while later he was stuffing his face with vigor. The salt on
> his 
> eggs stung his lip, but it barely slowed him down. Food never tasted so 
> good.
> After breakfast, Grandpa asked Dean to follow him into his bedroom. Dean
> 
> stood there while Grandpa poked around in a closet. He came back and set
> a 
> toaster sized wooden box in front of the boy. He bent down and opened
> it. "Take a look at this," he said, all smiles and tenderness. Inside
> the box 
> were perhaps fifty arrowheads. "These are ones I've found over the years
> 
> during spring plowing. Winter always brings 'em up."
> Dean was awestruck. He looked at the old man, who told him, "Go ahead,
> you 
> can have one."
> Dean rifled through the collection. Some of the arrowheads were chipped
> or 
> broken, but most were intact. He found a large one, a blueish brown
> color, 
> still sharp and pointy.
> "Can I have this one, Grandpa?"
> "Sure, it's yours," Grandpa said. "Now, are we friends?" The old man
> stuck 
> out a leathery hand. Dean hesitated, then shook it. Grandpa put his box
> of 
> treasures back and told him to go play outside until his Daddy arrived.
> Dean and his tin soldier Joe were scouting for Indians when the Country 
> Squire came rolling up the driveway. He ran over and jumped into the
> arms of 
> his Dad.
> "Daddy, where were you?"
> Len Henderson groaned and hugged him tightly. "I'm sorry, Deano. We
> played 
> cards late and I was really tired, so I just slept at Mr. Will's place."
> Len held him out and looked him over. "Hey Champ, what happened to your
> lip?" Dean's face took on a somber 
> expression, shame and anger not deeply buried.
> "Grandpa knocked me on the floor, and I bit my lip. He was mean Daddy, I
> don't 
> like it here."
> Len Henderson stared mutely at the boy for a minute, noticing for the
> first 
> time the tin soldier in his hand. His eyes didn't move from the soldier
> as 
> he lowered his son to the ground.
> "I'm going inside to talk to Grandpa and fetch your stuff. You stay out
> here 
> in the car and find us a good station on the radio. OK?" Dean got into
> the 
> driver seat and his father closed the car door.
> "I'll be back shortly, you stay here."
> Dean put Joe away in his pocket, then turned the radio on and fiddled
> with 
> the dial. Mostly all he could find was static. He was beginning to catch
> a 
> Gospel station when he heard shouting coming from the house. He turned
> the 
> volume down, but the sounds were muffled and difficult to make out. A
> large 
> crashing sound made Dean jump. It was followed by the sound of metal 
> falling, like someone had dropped a tray full of silverware. Dean
> quickly 
> turned the volume back up and resumed tuning the radio when he saw his 
> father coming to the car, Dean's small suitcase in hand. He moved over
> to 
> his side as his Dad slid in behind the wheel.
>  Len Henderson's complexion was a mottled red, and he was breathing
> harder 
> than normal. His hair was mussed, and a trickle of blood spilled out of
> his 
> lower lip. Dean felt concerned, but something told him it wasn't the
> time to 
> talk. His father had that look that he sometimes did right before he
> yelled 
> at Dean or Mommy, so he pulled out Joe and his new arrowhead and played
> for 
> a while.
> An awkward silence loomed in the car as they weaved their way to the 
> highway. Once traveling at seventy up the Interstate, Dean put down his 
> things to look at his Dad. His skin was its normal color now, and his
> Dad 
> looked like himself, except for the stubble and the split lip. "Daddy,
> are you all right?" Len turned and smiled at his son. "I'm fine, Champ.
> Don't you worry. I'm 
> sorry things didn't go well at Grandpa's. You okay?"
> Dean watched his father for a second, wondering what answer his Dad was 
> looking to hear.
> "I'm okay, Daddy, glad we're going home. And now we got matching lips!"
> They 
> laughed, and Dean's father ruffled his fingers through the boy's crew
> cut. A few miles further down the road, Dean was fingering the tip of
> the large 
> arrowhead as he thought about his night in the hole. He never wanted to 
> visit Grandpa ever again. He rolled his window down and tossed the
> arrowhead 
> out onto the highway, glad to be rid of it. Let it be run over and
> crushed, 
> along with the memories of that mean old man.
> * * * * *
> "Daddy, you're hurting me," Little Tyler Henderson croaked, his father's
> 
> arms like a boa constrictor around his small chest.
> Unconscious of his grip, Dean careened back to the moment and loosened
> his 
> clutch on Tyler. The drumbeat of his pulse still throbbed in his temple
> as 
> he tried to shake the fright of the exhumed memory. So fresh in his mind
> 
> right now, it could have happened this very morning. Yet, Dean couldn't 
> recall ever thinking of that horrible trip since it happened. Like the
> tin 
> soldier and the marble, the memory had been buried a long time ago.
> "Dean, are you all right?" Tasha Henderson put a hand on her husband's 
> shoulder. Dean looked pale, his eyes bloodshot and wet.
> "Dean?" she repeated.
> He stood, with Tyler still held snugly in his arms. He snuffled, and
> wiped 
> his eyes with a shirt sleeve.
> "Yeah, I'm OK. I just had this horrible image . . . scared the hell out
> of 
> me I guess."
> "We can make sure the owners do something to protect that well," the
> real 
> estate agent said.
> "Be sure to do that," Dean told her. Then he grabbed his wife's hand and
> 
> said, "C'mon honey. I don't think this place is for us."
> 
> 
> 
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