[stylist] Poem - "David" - ??? Draft
Jackie Williams
jackieleepoet at cox.net
Wed Nov 19 17:25:29 UTC 2014
Bill,
This poem is both sensitive and strong. I marvel at your use of similes so
effectively in all of your poetry.
Jackie
Time is the school in which we learn.
Time is the fire in which we burn.
Delmore Schwartz
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Subject: [stylist] Poem - "David" - ??? Draft
Hello,
Here's a kind of eulogy for my friend David, who died about twenty years
ago.
--Bill
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*David*
Lightning bright, his mindfire gave wonder
to snailslow teachers, snug
in their certainties. There were a swarm of us,
high flyers, ace brained and mocking,
and David, mad as a candlestar moth,
heard light lucid choirs, as sure
in their cadence as marching drums.
We were, half of us, gay as chimes,
and pelted half laughing, half dance
through gasping yards, while parents hummed
over beers, so baffled drunk high:
that one's mine, O see how he wins the air prize,
his black besalted hair so thick
it catches hickory smoke and spring,
and he so blond, and he so brown, and he so quick
it shudders the lungs.
But David the fleet was mad as a purple
eclipse:sun-bright behind, and moon-dark before,
and Orion belt stars between.
He was dark, and strange, and prince of dreams
and fevers; and in our day, together we ruled
old Starling Street; but afterward he fell
into plague and drained away, he drained away.
My fevers cooled, I think, and write, and take my meds,
and count my sainted laughing dead.
--
"Oh, Sophie! Whyfore have you eated all de cheeldren?"
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