[stylist] BH cinquain

[Jackie Williams]

Barbara,
I finally got to the treasured cinquains.
This cinquain has a perfect topic, or theme. A lot of punch.
I find myself analyzing the6 syllable line, seeking clarification perhaps
through the punctuation. Can you take another read and see if you can find
another path? 
Please write more of them.
Jackie Lee

Time is the school in which we learn.
Time is the fire in which we burn.
Delmore Schwartz	 


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Here's my contribution to the cinquain writing:

A DILEMMA
by Barbara Hammel

You know,
What's wrong with a
Two-faced person is you
Never know with which face you are
Speaking.

Sent from my iPhone

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