[stylist] BH cinquain

[Barbara HAMMEL]

Such as in put a punctuation mark before the word you? I'm not coming up with another way to phrase currently.
Barbara

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> On Aug 9, 2015, at 19:50, Jackie Williams via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> 
> Barbara,
> I finally got to the treasured cinquains.
> This cinquain has a perfect topic, or theme. A lot of punch.
> I find myself analyzing the6 syllable line, seeking clarification perhaps
> through the punctuation. Can you take another read and see if you can find
> another path? 
> Please write more of them.
> Jackie Lee
> 
> Time is the school in which we learn.
> Time is the fire in which we burn.
> Delmore Schwartz     
> 
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> HAMMEL via stylist
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> Subject: [stylist] BH cinquain
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> 
> Here's my contribution to the cinquain writing:
> 
> A DILEMMA
> by Barbara Hammel
> 
> You know,
> What's wrong with a
> Two-faced person is you
> Never know with which face you are
> Speaking.
> 
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