[stylist] Tanka

[Lynda Lambert]

Breaking news: No titles and no numbering is permitted in tanka circles - or 
in the publications of the tanks society literary magazines.  Lynda

-----Original Message----- 
From: Jackie Williams via stylist
Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 1:50 PM
To: 'Writers' Division Mailing List'
Cc: Jackie Williams
Subject: Re: [stylist] Tanka

Shawn,
Do Tanka not have titles like Haiku?
Your first line is a bit confusing to me, with the word Wonderout and it
makes six syllables. I love the rest of it, and will think about it as I
imagine looking into the heavens at the stars.

Jackie Lee

Time is the school in which we learn.
Time is the fire in which we burn.
Delmore Schwartz


-----Original Message-----
From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Jacobson,
Shawn D via stylist
Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 10:28 AM
To: Writer's Division Mailing List (stylist at nfbnet.org)
Cc: Jacobson, Shawn D
Subject: [stylist] Tanka

Here's one (since we're trading tankas.

Wonderout father God
who also is my mother
I shall give you praise.
You gorge the great burning stars,
And give rest to little ones.

Shawn
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