[stylist] Goldstone

[Barbara HAMMEL]

If you are writing this for a group of people who already know the physical properties of goldstone, it's a great article. If you want people to recognize it on their own, it might be wise to describe its physical properties. If I went to a store to buy one, without asking the salesperson who knows all the stones, how would I describe what I want to the person going with me.
Barbara

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> On Aug 20, 2015, at 00:22, EvaMarie Sanchez via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> 
> Hello Writers and Wits, I am attaching a paper I wrote in hopes that I get
> critiqued. I do want your comments on this and edits. I always find, that
> one should not edit their own work alone. Other eyes are a benefit. Yes,
> pun intended.
> Thanks my friends,
> Many Blessings to you all.
> Eve
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> <Goldstone.docx>
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