[stylist] Goldstone

[Chris Kuell]

Hi Eve,


I just finished reading your paper,  and I think it reads well. The flow of ideas is good, the pacing is good, and no writing errors jumped  out at me.



Beyond this, I can't give much of a critique, as I don't know who your intended audience is. If it is an academic paper, I'd want to see some references. If the audience is like believers, I think they will enjoy this piece.

Good luck,

Chris