[stylist] Goldstone

[EvaMarie Sanchez]

Thanks to all of you for your help and suggestions.
It is meant for a Pagan publication I edit. I have decided to include an
article focusing on a specific stone or herb in each issue. This was my
first of these types. The rest of the paper is filled with other writers, I
just wanted to do something as well.
Again, Thanks for reading it, even if it is not your cup of tea. haha
Eve
Tea does sound lovely though.

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On Fri, Aug 21, 2015 at 10:37 AM, Chris Kuell via stylist <
stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:

> Hi Eve,
>
>
> I just finished reading your paper,  and I think it reads well. The flow
> of ideas is good, the pacing is good, and no writing errors jumped  out at
> me.
>
>
>
> Beyond this, I can't give much of a critique, as I don't know who your
> intended audience is. If it is an academic paper, I'd want to see some
> references. If the audience is like believers, I think they will enjoy this
> piece.
>
> Good luck,
>
> Chris
>
>
>
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