[stylist] My turn to get creative. What do you think?

[Pagan Tree]

Kendra, It is nice. In the line "And love bird songs
greets us." I would take out one of the plurals though.
I am rarely on here, so may have missed your introduction. Could you tell
me a bit about yourself?
Eve Sanchez

On Wed, Feb 25, 2015 at 11:08 PM, Kendra Schafer via stylist <
stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:

> Hi all!
> After reading that last bit of creative writing, I thought that I'd join
> in and write something myself. What do you all think? It's below here.
> Spring Time is on its Way
> Spring is calling,
> Sun is rising,
> Wind is blowing from the east.
> As flowers grow,
> Mother Earth opens her wonderful show.
> As the sky grows warmer,
> Eagles fly higher,
> As they use the thermals,
> To create their own rolar coasters.
> And all around us is a lot of energy and love.
> As we Rome,
> New life meets us,
> And love bird songs greets us.
> Signs of life like this,
> Let's us know that spring is coming.
>
> What do you all think?
> Kendra
>
>
> Sent from my iPhone
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