[stylist] My turn to get creative. What do you think?

[Chris Kuell]

Hey Kendra,

Your poem, and all the snow outside my window, have me yearning for spring.
I like all your references to warmth, airiness, birds and flowers in this
poem. However, to me, this line just doesn't seem to flow with the rest:
And all around us is a lot of energy and love. 

The line isn't bad, but it doesn't follow the rhythm of the rest of the
poem. In addition, you have 2 lines below with extra 's's:

And love bird songs greets (greet) us. 
Signs of life like this, 
Let's (Let) us know that spring is coming.  

Thanks for sharing your work with us.

Chris