[stylist] My turn to get creative. What do you think?

[Bill Outman]

Good morning, Kendraand list.  

I like the sentiment of the coming of spring, especially for those who have
had to endure a difficult winter.  

I don't know how to place these lines in order but I noticed they could be a
pair somehow.  Here are the lines that drew my attention.  

And all around us is a lot of energy and love.
And love bird songs greets us.

Perhaps the second could be the following.  

And love's bird song greets us.  

That gets rid of the problem with the plurals and links to the energy and
love line, personifying love.  


Well, indeed spring is on the way, folks.  Another sure sign ist that spring
training baseball games will start next week here in Florida and in Arizona.


Bill Outman 
Daytona Beach, Florida 


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From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Kendra
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Sent: Thursday, February 26, 2015 1:09 AM
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Subject: [stylist] My turn to get creative. What do you think?

Hi all! 
After reading that last bit of creative writing, I thought that I'd join in
and write something myself. What do you all think? It's below here. 
Spring Time is on its Way 
Spring is calling, 
Sun is rising, 
Wind is blowing from the east. 
As flowers grow, 
Mother Earth opens her wonderful show. 
As the sky grows warmer, 
Eagles fly higher, 
As they use the thermals, 
To create their own rolar coasters. 
And all around us is a lot of energy and love. 
As we Rome, 
New life meets us, 
And love bird songs greets us. 
Signs of life like this, 
Let's us know that spring is coming.  

What do you all think? 
Kendra 


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