[stylist] Poem - "Breeze" - Second Draft

[Barbara HAMMEL]

Okay, I may not be the only one who didn't know the word devoir. It is a formal expression for respect. Thank you, Bill, for teaching me a new word today.
Barbara

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> On Jul 21, 2015, at 11:08, William L Houts via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Good Morning, My Droogies,
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> Here's my secondish or thirdish run at a poem I started on yesterday.  It's a little bit of nothing, really, just an etude or finger exercise, a little study in rhyme, but for me anyway it has it's satisfactions, the maihn one being that I was in despair over it yesterday and posted to the list about that, but now I've got this little piece which I might take up in the future and see what might be made of it. if anything.
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> --Bill
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> *Breeze *
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> The wind winds clever airfoot
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> through my hair, and laves my face of reddish sweat.
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> It chills a little, and though I fly me wide
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> to greet this gust, this guest, I guess
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> I'll bear his touch with breath as fair as unseen kiss:
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> that I might meet the wind in wind's own dress
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> and bear to bed his cares, that he might fly
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> to seas of hallelujah isles, his mission made
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> to bless another, maybe darker face
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> and, his devoirs done, to scud the waves.
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> "Oh, Sophie!  Whyfore have you eated all de cheeldren?"
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